once upon a time on a planet called Princess land they live a little girl whose name was Emily she was 4 years old. Emily loved the color pink. Mostly everything she had was pink her room was pink with a pink carpet and a white and pink bed. Her toys were all pink even her toy box was pink her close was pink too,her shorts,pants,dresses,unberaler,gumboots and even her shoes.
After one year it was her birthday she liked all her birthday present. But her mum had one more surprise for her the surprise was that she was going to start school on Monday,she was so excited to go school tomorrow.So the next morning she woke up eraly and got ready,than walked to school with her mum.When she walked in the class room lots of kids where looking at her,strat after she walked in the techer said (ok class we have a new student in our clase today her name is Emily) all the students in room 2 said welcome Emily.So she sat down with the classe.At lunch time she was paling at the prak.She didn't really no were every thing was.after school the bell rang she whent out then she rimeberd that she left her bag in the clase so she went back in the caless room she got her bag and when she whent to dore it was looked she called out help but they was only one techer and she helped her than she whent home and told her mum the story the end.
1 comment:
The first day at school is tough isn't it. Luckily it gets better each day. I like that you have tried to use a variety of sentence beginnings. Kevine I think you need to really plan your writing each time before jumping straight into writing. Think what you will talk about in each paragraph and then write. Remember a narrative has the following structure: Introduction, Problem, Action, Solution.
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