Once a long long time ago they was a teacher named Mr Marks. School was finished and it was time for the holidays.So he decided to go out to antarctica to investigate.
He flew in helicopter and it talk about 12 hours to get there.When he got there the first thing he did was sit up his tent. It talk a long time for Mr Maks to set up his camp site.When he finished he went for a little walk he didn't take long.
The next day he decided to go for a swim he had a dry suit instead of a wet suit.He jumped in the water and (splash) the water went loudy.He swam all around then he saw a killer whale so he swam as fast like dolfan.and the killer whale didn't get him.
So he diseted to never ever go to antarcta aging.So he whent backe to new zealand and never whent backe.So for his holiday next year he diseted to go to the USA.
2 comments:
Hi Kevine I like what you wrote about Mr Marks long Greenery it was so cool I like the picture that went with it keep up the good work!!!From Nikki
I don't remember that trip, are you sure it is a real story? Please remember to check your punctuation and capital letters for names of places and people.
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