Thursday, 31 October 2013

Suck On a Island

Once upon a time there was a family of five who have been saving money for the past few years to go to the united states of america. They had a really helpful neighbor named Mr sam. This family has been saving money for over 2 years. In this family they have 2 girls named Anna and Brooklyn and one boy named Jonathan and Mr and Mrs Smith. Everybody in this family was a very good swimmer even Mr and Mrs Smith.

Mr sam told the Smith family that he wasn't going to the U.S.A. One hot day as Anna was walking on the beach she found 50 dollars laying on the sand so she picked it up and talk it to her parents. They were so lucky she found because they needed 50 dollars so they can have enf money to go to the U.S.A.The next day they all stated to pack for the trip America .

  2 weeks later they went to the airport. Everyone in there family was so excited. They had to wait for one or two hours before their plan came. When the plan came they were so excited. But before they got in the plan they had to put their bags in first. They slowly walked in Wow said Brooklyn it is amazing said Jonathan while Mr and Mrs Smith just smiled.

Put your seatbelts on everybody get ready for take of. Jonathan was looking out the window they were getting higher and higher until they were as high as the clouds. It talk about 7 hours when they were half way there.
BOOM BOOM! what is that noise said Brooklyn what noise and replaced shhh Brooklyn said again We're Going down. People started panicking and screaming.

They fell into the water likely everybody in there family knew how to swim they swim to the closest Island and started their new life there they were so happy. But then Mrs Smith released something  there next door neighbour
Mr Sam was in the plan and he said that he wasn't coming. But he was there and he keep going into the pilots room. So Mr Sam masted of done something to the pilot.

The Smith family didn't find out what Mr Sam did to the Pilot but they lived happily ever after on a very strange island. but they were sad because  100sof people died.

                      The End   

1 comment:

Autumn Sprouse said...

Wow Kevine! I loved reading your story! I am from the United States of America from Mobile, Alabama. I attend the University of South Alabama in Mobile, Alabama also. Great job on your story! You kept me interested the whole time! Thank you for blogging and sharing your wonderful story! Keep up the great work!

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